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Writing Samples
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More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Photograps
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Photographs
 in the media are one of the most controversial topics of debate these days. A number of individuals consider them to be a
trusworthy
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trustworthy
 part of
news
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,
while
 others believe that they are absolutely unreliable.
Nevertheless
, I reckon that images are extremely important in any type of
articles
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article
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 and humans could definitely rely on them. On the one hand, many people do not trust photographs
due to
 the fact that they consider
this
 source to be untrustworthy.
To begin
 with, modern technologies bring humans an opportunity to edit every photo in
order
 to impress society. For sure, the Internet is full of content
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 provides fake photos or videos of a specific event.
For example
, social media have several photos of the president of Russia, Vladimir Putin, which are made by programmists in
order
 to show his speech in Moskow.
However
, it is easy to
recodnize
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recognise
 that they were made in
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Photoshop
due to
 the fact that designers made a few mistakes and
illustated
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illustrated
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 the president's hand highly
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. Undoubtedly,
this
 case made people
to
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be aware of
such
 publications and pay more attention to every single picture.
On the other hand
, I agree that an image could be
a
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great evidence of the event and help people to understand the situation correctly.
Firstly
, nowadays the government strictly
controll
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control
controls
 every illustration before its publishing.
Moreover
, there are appropriate punishments
which
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 force workers in the media industry
such
 as newspapers and channels to use only true images.
For instance
, if a journalist
postes
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posts
 a fake image, he would be judged,
consequenly
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consequently
,
this
 system works as a deterrent to would-be liars.
Secondly
, those pictures should be checked by
a specific computers
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 in
order
 to exclude the possibility of editing.
To conclude
, despite varying
opinion
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opinions
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, I reckon that modern newspapers and news channels provide only photographs which are absolutely irrefutable.
As a consequence
,
this
 option could be used in
order
 to support some upcoming stories and valuable articles.
Submitted by sofsya.fedorenko.2001 on

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