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Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is commonly believed that the best
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 to succeed in
education
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 is by memorizing a variety of subjects. In my view, I disagree with
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 statement, as
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 should not be considered as a tool but as a goal to gain new
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 and skills. On the one hand,
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memorization can help
people
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 to collect new things into their brains.
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, students who are working usually do not have enough
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 to read some books fully in order to prepare for their exam, and the only
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 is by memorizing the
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that
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 examined by the teachers.
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, many
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 use
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method
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 to reduce the amount of studying
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 and they hope the
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 could help them to finish the exam and achieve the score that they desire
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.
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,
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memorization is not an effective
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 to support
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's
education
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. I believe there is a
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 that can be used by
individuals
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 to acquire new
knowledge
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. To illustrate, many
people
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 do not get perfect scores on their exams since they only
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 the
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 in a short period of
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.
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, most
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schools teach their students to memorize the formulas of mathematics without
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 the understanding and the implementation
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 their everyday activities.
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, the understanding of a variety of
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 is needed by
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 who desire
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 their
education
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 level, but
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individuals
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 should sacrifice a lot of
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 to understand many subjects in order to succeed in the future. To summarize, there is a statement that states the
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 of memorizing a variety of facts could help the
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individuals
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success
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 in
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. In my view,
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memorizing some
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 is not an effective
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 to obtain new skills and
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while
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the
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people
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 should combine memorization with a great understanding of the
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, so success in
education
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 is possible for them.
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