Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People
believe that saving the environment
is the only responsibility of the government
. The government
should protect all aspects of the environment
such
as forests, parks, gardens, roads and many more. On the contrary
, some people
think that the responsibility for protecting the environment
is not only for the government
but also
for all citizens
.
The government
usually creates some procedures and regulations to save the environment
. It can be done from little things to specific ones. This
situation should suggest people
for saving the environment
. Sometimes, it can be hard for the council to take care of all aspects of the environment
. If the citizens
do not feel responsible for managing the environment
, it can be dangerous. There will be a lot of problems that can be impacted. Air pollution is an example of a damaged environment
. Finally
, our earth will be hazardous for human living.
On the other hand
, all people
have the same responsibility to take care of our environment
. They should work together between the government
and all citizens
so the environment
will be in a better condition. For instance
, if the council produces new regulations for restricting the usage of fossil fuels, citizens
must follow regulations. This
can be good for our environment
so it can increase our health rate. In the end, collaboration among all individuals in the world can create a better human life in the future.
To conclude
, there are several negative impacts if citizens
are not involved in protecting the environment
. They should protect and manage the environment
safely. Then
, the collaboration with the council will have a good opportunity for the environment
to be a human living.Submitted by irhamtaufiqurrahman on
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Coherence & Cohesion
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Coherence & Cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are important components of your essay. They should clearly present the topic and your opinion, and summarise the main points discussed, respectively. Your introduction could be more precise and your conclusion more summarised.
Coherence & Cohesion
Your main points need to be developed and supported by specific examples or evidence. Avoid making general statements without backing them up with detailed examples or explanations.
Task Achievement
Make sure you address all parts of the task, and give a balanced discussion of both views mentioned in the prompt before providing a clear opinion. Ensure your opinion is consistent throughout the essay.
Task Achievement
Ideas should be fully extended, providing clear and well-developed arguments for your viewpoint. Avoid overly simplistic statements and ensure that your essay's ideas are comprehensive and insightful.
Task Achievement
Include a wider range of relevant examples to support your arguments. Specificity adds depth to your discussion and demonstrates your ability to relate theoretical ideas to real-world contexts.
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