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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA are in fast-food restaurant between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA are in fast-food restaurant between 2003 and 2013.
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This
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 chart demonstrates how often American citizens ate at fast-
food
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 restaurants between 2003 and 2013. There are six groups of
people
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 with different frequency of attendance in fast
food
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places
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 each depicted in a different position on the horizontal axis.
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, the vertical axis shows the percentage of
people
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 belonging to that group.
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, data for years 2003, 2006 and 2013 are illustrated for each group in different colors. Comparing 2003 and 2006, there was a decrease in
people
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 who consumed fast
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 every day in 2006 with respect to 2003.
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, more
people
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 decided to go to fast
food
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 restaurants several times a week or even once a week in 2006 than they did in 2003.
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, there was a plummet in the portion of
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 who went to these
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 once or twice a month.
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, the group corresponding to a few times a year had a small rise and the number of
people
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 who never go to fast-
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 restaurants was reduced to less than 5%.
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, folk who go to fast
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places
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 to eat once or several times a week were reduced in 2013 and
people
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 who go to these
places
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 once or twice a month had a big increase to over one third of the population. Indeed, other groups stayed the same as in the year 2006.
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, a bell shape is established in these charts where the least popular groups are placed at each end of the spectrum.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, food, places with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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