You have won a holiday to Hawaii with one extra ticket. Write a letter to someone to invite them along with you. In the letter: - Explain what has happened and that you would like them to come - Give details of when the trip will take place - Inform the person of the things they will need for the trip

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Dear Erik, How have you been? It's been 4 months since our

trip

to Indonesia and it was

such

an exciting experience to have you as my travel partner.

Therefore

, I would like to invite you for a

trip

Hawaii

this

August.

Right

now, you may ask me how I got 2 tickets in

Hawaii

in the first place. The reason was I actually won a lottery

while

strolling down to the shopping mall to buy some clothes. At that time, I came across a small kiosk listing the first prize was a pair of tickets to

Hawaii

. Seeing that, I thought "Why not" and gave it a try.

As a result

right

now I am having the ticket, still in shock and writing

this

letter to invite you ,my friend. The

trip

will be a month from now, from August 16 till August 31, which is going to be a 2-week

trip

. We depart from Noi Bai Airport and transit to Tokyo before heading to

Hawaii

International Airport of Honolulu. There will be a tour guide for

this

trip

to show us around.

Right

now, I am working on my travel VISA to the US and I suggest you do the same

right

away.

Also

since it is very sunny in

Hawaii

, sunglasses and suncreams are the 2 most essential items to go as well.

Additionally

, we will exchange some US dollars for the surfboard rental and other travel expenses since the agency will cover our accommodation. Again, I would like to have you on the

trip

with me my friend. Please let me know one week from now if you can make it for the holiday. Best regards, Son Nguyen

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

283 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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