Write a letter to a local council about the closure of playground and explain Why few children are using the playground How to increase teh number of children using the playground Why this is important.

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Hello Sir, I am writing
this
to express my concern about the abandoned playground in my community.The
ground
located at 1221 Mayfield Road is not used by locals these days
due to
poor conditions of equipment.
In addition
,most of the items are not safe to use
as well as
land is
also
not evenly levelled which causes injuries to individuals. Many injuries have happened to residents in the past few months which has resulted in the closure of
this
place. In my opinion, if new equipment is installed and even
ground
level is done
then
children will start playing on
this
ground
.
Moreover
, new grass and trees should be planted to make the environment suitable for players. A well-maintained playground is essential for a community because the growth of children depends on physical activities
therefore
, a good playground is like a basic need for people.
Thus
, work should be started to make the
ground
suitable for playing . I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours sincerely, Gill.
Submitted by gill.g24 on

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