The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduates degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduates degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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The pie chart compares, the destination of Anthropology graduates from a university who completed an undergraduate degree and the table about the income of the anthropologists after 5 years of work. To summarize, after their course in Anthropology,
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chose full-time work as a priority followed by part-time and the rest were insignificant. After 5 years growth of anthropologists in freelance stood first rather than Government and Private sectors. From a university, the
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who completed Anthropology joined full-time work was 52%
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part-time job was 15%.
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, 12% of
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were unemployed in the same course.
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, there are 5% of
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did part-time
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post-graduate study. On the flip side, 8% each in full-time post-graduate education and the rest have unknown statuses. Turning to the table, after the successful completion of 5 years career, 80% of professionals worked as Freelance consultants and Private companies gained more than $75,000
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50% of the people in the Government sector.
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, 50% of workers in the Government field received more than $100,000 and the rest were negligible.
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