7. You're working overseas in an international company. You are leaving the country in emergency. Write a letter to your friends explaining the situation. In the letter, you should - apologise for leaving like this - explain what happened - tell them what you're going to miss about working with them

#re #company #country #emergency #friends #situation #apologise

Dear Friend, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health.

I’m

writing

this

letter to convey that I have to go to my native place to settle in India permanently on account of an emergency.

To begin

with, I feel disheartened that I have to inform my situation through a letter and my sincere apologies for the same. My grandmother had a stroke

last

night all of a sudden, and there is nobody in my village to take care of her.

I’m

the only person who can stay with her in

such

difficult circumstances. Since

I’m

leaving in a hurry, I don’t have sufficient time to catch up with you in person, and there is only one flight which leaves today evening when I tried to book tickets on the internet. Though

I’m

leaving abruptly, I would like you to know that it was an immense pleasure to work with you as I had an amazing experience in these past three years in Australia.

Furthermore

, I had great learning and gained knowledge to improve my skills which are helpful throughout my career. Let’s stay in touch, and I hope to meet you soon. Best Regards, John.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

197 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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