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You are employed full-time and also doing a part-time evening course. You are not able to continue the course. Write a letter to the course lecturer. In the letter • explain why you cannot continue the course • describe the situation • say what you will be doing about it

#course #lecturer #situation
Dear Mrs. Samuel, I am Annie, a student
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 your French Learning class. I had enrolled myself
for learning
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to learn
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 a new
language
. Unfortunately, I cannot continue the course as I am
full-time
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a full-time
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 worker at a private organization. I was highly interested in learning
French
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language
 and got myself enrolled in your
language
 learning classes two weeks earlier.
However
, I cannot continue
this
4 week long
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 programme as I have to travel abroad on a business trip with my fellow teammates. Despite all my
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 I could not postpone the trip. In my opinion, the best idea is
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restart my training once I have accomplished all my priorities. I apologize for
this
 inconvenience caused. I assure you
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 bounce back with much more commitment
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 your classes in
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. I hope you understand my situation and cooperate. Yours sincerely, Annie.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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