The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts the figures for enquiries sent by the tourist information office in a city for six
months
in 2011. It is clear from the graph that the Use synonyms
number
of people who sent by Use synonyms
telephone
and in Use synonyms
person
increased over the six years, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of tourists who sent by letter or email decreased in the same period.
Use synonyms
According to
what is shown, in the first Linking Words
three
Use synonyms
months
, the Use synonyms
number
of people who went to the office in Use synonyms
person
increased and doubled who sent by Use synonyms
telephone
. Use synonyms
However
, the increase in Linking Words
person
was from 420 to 800 and by Use synonyms
telephone
was almost 900 to 1000. Use synonyms
In addition
, in the next Linking Words
three
Use synonyms
months
the increase was huge, from 800 in Use synonyms
person
to 1900, Use synonyms
while
by Linking Words
telephone
, the first month was the same, after that went up until 1600 in June.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of people who sent the latter or email decreased slightly in the first Use synonyms
three
Use synonyms
months
, Use synonyms
while
in the next two Linking Words
months
, the decrease was gradual from 700 to nearly 3800. The Use synonyms
last
month was at the same level.
Linking Words
To sum up
, the tourists in the Linking Words
last
Linking Words
three
Use synonyms
months
focused on the Use synonyms
telephone
and in Use synonyms
person
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words months, number, telephone, person, three with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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