The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts the figures for enquiries sent by the tourist information office in a city for six
months
in 2011. It is clear from the graph that the number
of people who sent by telephone
and in person
increased over the six years, while
the number
of tourists who sent by letter or email decreased in the same period.
According to
what is shown, in the first three
months
, the number
of people who went to the office in person
increased and doubled who sent by telephone
. However
, the increase in person
was from 420 to 800 and by telephone
was almost 900 to 1000. In addition
, in the next three
months
the increase was huge, from 800 in person
to 1900, while
by telephone
, the first month was the same, after that went up until 1600 in June.
On the other hand
, the number
of people who sent the latter or email decreased slightly in the first three
months
, while
in the next two months
, the decrease was gradual from 700 to nearly 3800. The last
month was at the same level.
To sum up
, the tourists in the last
three
months
focused on the telephone
and in person
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