Development in technology causes envionmental problems. Some people believe the solution in these problems is everyone accepts asimpler way of lfe, while others say that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both views and glve your own opinion.

Technology

has made life much easier, but

unfortunately

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it has

also

made a devastating impact on the

environment

.

While

some may think that the solution lies in abandoning

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technology

and living a

quitter

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life, others see that modern

machines

are reliable on,

to solve

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this

problem.

This

essay will discuss both arguments and, in my opinion, I think that machinery can help in solving the environmental issue.

To begin

with, using

less

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machines

and depending on alternative sources to save the

environment

is indeed a good choice.

Firstly

, if everyone used

less

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cars

and walked to work

instead

, it would improve the quality of the air.

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amount of carbon emissions will decrease significantly and

subsequently

leads

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lead

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to cleaner air to breathe and an improved atmosphere.

Furthermore

, if factories depended on

less

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gas-based

machines

, it would

also

lower the pollution caused by those

machineries

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machinery

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.

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, Egypt has established a law that

minimize

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the usage of machinery and

depend

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on alternative greener sources. To sum it up, it has been quite difficult to decrease the usage of

machines

but it is in some

people

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opinion a good choice to save the

environment

.

On the other hand

, some individuals think that the problem makers are the lifeline for solving it,

in other words

,

Machines

can figure out how to save the

environment

. Solar plants can harvest the sun’s energy and convert it to electricity that supplies all countries around the globe with clean energy,

therefore

, the fossil fuels which emit harmful gases will be redundant.

Also

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electrical

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cars

are great substituent for conventional

cars

that pollute the atmosphere and it decreases the need for fossil fuels.

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,

a

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recent research shows that by 2030, carbon

emission

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emissions

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will

decreases

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by 80% owing to

electrical

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cars

. To summarize, environmental

issue

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issues

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can be solved with the assistance of

technology

. In my opinion, modern techs can be used to help in coming up with solutions to save the

environment

, it just

need

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the proper guidance by humans and

creative

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. In conclusion, it can be reiterated that

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techs have merits and demerits when it comes to

environment

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the environment

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, it depends more on

human

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the human

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way of using the

technology

. It can be used to save or to deteriorate the atmosphere.