The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared
The aforementioned graphs indicate the outcome of a survey among the
adults
to continuing their education. The first one shows the matters that people want to Use synonyms
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. The second chart demonstrates society's thoughts about the cost of each course and how should be split.
The bar chart illustrates that 40 per Use synonyms
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because they are interested in a subject. The second top per Use synonyms
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value is that they want to gain a qualification. 22 per Use synonyms
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stated that studying in higher courses will help their current job. The improved prospect of promotion and enjoying from the Use synonyms
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, just need to meet new people.
The pie graph related to society's belief in the cost of courses. The majority of people think that individuals should pay for themself, Use synonyms
this
statistic is about 40 per Linking Words
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, about 35 per Linking Words
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say that employers should pay the cost of Use synonyms
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Finally
, the Linking Words
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The result of the survey showed the reason for the Linking Words
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and their beliefs about who should pay the fee. It is interesting that most of them want to Use synonyms
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because it is their desire. Ultimately, they think the payment is on their own.Use synonyms
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