Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job. Describe a job you have found for him/her including: - What are the duties? - Why do you think it is a good job for him/her? - What does he/she have to do to get it?
Dear Peter,
How are you? I hope you and your family are all well. I'm writing to let you know about a part-time job. Your sister told me that you're looking for a part-time during term break. At my workplace, they are looking for a new waiter. For the role, you have to do table service. include, greeting customers, serving food and cleaning tables for a new set of customers.
I think
this
job is gonna be a good opportunity for you because you are going to do the hospitality course next year so I really recommend you. Also
, in this
restaurant, they are very lovely, good atmosphere. Furthermore
, They are paid at an acceptable rate.
If you are interested in this
job, let me know I'm going to take you to talk with Linny. She is the manager of the restaurant. I will finish my letter for now. Don't forget to write me back.
Cheers,
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Task Response
Consider providing more detail about the job duties and how your friend can prepare for the interview, as this would further enhance the response to the task.
Grammar
Although minor grammatical errors are present, focusing on improving grammatical accuracy could enhance the clarity of your message.
Tone
Your letter starts and ends with friendly and appropriate greetings and closings, which sets a warm tone throughout.
Structure
You've structured the letter well, with each paragraph focusing on a different aspect of the job opportunity, making the information easy to follow.
Task Response
Your reasoning as to why this job would be good for your friend is thoughtful, showing your understanding of your friend's interests and future plans.