The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The linear graph describes the average monthly fluctuations in the values of three
materials
, namely: copper
, nickel
, and zinc
. Overall
, there are two general trends: copper
and nickel
showed a decrease in the graph, however
, zinc
rose gradually over the each month in 2014 by percentages.
Looking into more detail, the costs of the materials
decreased dramatically from January to June. Nickel
described mild fluctuations with around 9% changes, which showed more price changes than the two other materials
. Moreover
, the same element showed its lowest point in June, along with
the copper
and zinc
. Interestingly, each of the prices of materials
showed a steady point between July and September. Afterward, nickel
and zinc
illustrated a gradual rise in the middle of autumn, but surprisingly, the cost changes of copper
decreased at the same time. Finally
, at the end
of 2014, each element had mild fluctuations between 1 and 2%.Submitted by f1306dan on
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