The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
The pie charts illustrate the opinions of full-time and part-time
students
about the services provided by the University, including IT support and working hours. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that a higher level of satisfaction was observed for IT assistance.
Additionally
, full-time
students
were more delighted with both services than their part-time counterparts. Regarding IT support, more than half of the full-time respondents said they were very pleased with the service,
whereas
only a fifth of the part-time respondents reported a similar level of satisfaction.
Conversely
, only 15% of full-time
students
expressed dissatisfaction with IT support, against 45% of part-time learners. About a third of both groups of
students
were moderately satisfied with the service. The majority of both full-time and part-time learners were satisfied with working hours, with 87% and 72% respectively expressing satisfaction. Only 1% of full-time
students
interviewed were discontented with working hours,
while
the proportion was slightly higher among part-time
students
at 5%.
Nevertheless
, around 25% of part-time learners were content, compared to 12% of full-time ones who shared
this
opinion.
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