There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports center that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports center. In your letter: describe what the problem with the changing rooms is say what happened the last time you complained explain what you want the manager to do.

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Hello Mr.Smith. I am writing

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letter to need your attention towards a one serious issue occurring in our changing rooms. It is true that our sports

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has a great reputation in the entire city but unfortunately, we students have been facing problems with the changing room describe the problem in detail, changing room AC does not work properly and the bathroom main gate has been broken since march.

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, previously 2 weeks back when I highlighted

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problem at the reception I am assuming that no solution was even discussed with the management since

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has not been resolved to date. Even the receptionist didn't give the required attention to

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huge scenario. I would request you to please pay your immediate attention to

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matter and in the next month we are hosting the annual sports celebration at our college so the entire city students visit our college so it is necessary to fix

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problem before the annual sports day. Again I request you to please solve

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matter on a priority base. Looking forward to your positive response. Regards Meet

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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