Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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government
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country
but contrary to that some gentleman Use synonyms
argue
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argues
focus
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focused
by
the member of Change preposition
on by
public
office holder. Add an article
the public
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economy
the officials need to take into account Correct article usage
the economy
the
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health
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education
and Use synonyms
safety
of the public.
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the safety
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, among other important Linking Words
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tasks
the Add a comma
,tasks
government
give more priority Use synonyms
the
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to the
economy
of the Use synonyms
country
. The motive is to have high reserves so that Use synonyms
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country
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the country
should
perform its business dealings with other Verb problem
can
countries
without any pressure and Use synonyms
also
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country
has its currency at the top among other fellow Use synonyms
countries
. Use synonyms
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, Linking Words
election
campaign of different political parties includes economic reforms to gain maximum votes. Add an article
the election
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hence
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party
after winning Fix the agreement mistake
parties
election
want to make their Correct article usage
the election
country
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economic
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economically
and
so they have Correct word choice
apply
this
priority at the top of the list. Linking Words
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that, there Linking Words
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are other
tasks
that need to be done by Use synonyms
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government
for Add an article
the government
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the wellbeing
wellbeing
of its Correct your spelling
well-being
citizen
and are discussed below.
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citizens
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people
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argive
that Correct your spelling
argue
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health
, Correct article usage
the health
education
and security of the Use synonyms
people
are Use synonyms
also
equally important as Linking Words
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economy
. Correct article usage
the economy
Countries
having improved Use synonyms
health
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system
are considered among the advanced Fix the agreement mistake
systems
countries
. Use synonyms
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Similarly
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education
changes the fate of the Use synonyms
countries
and its Use synonyms
citizen
so it should be at the top of the list too. Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
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that, if there is Linking Words
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apply
country
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people
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. Use synonyms
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according to
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survey
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,survey
people
think that free Use synonyms
education
and free Use synonyms
health
services are more important than giving free money to Use synonyms
people
.
In my opinion, I think Use synonyms
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government
should do Add an article
the government
best
to provide all basic facilities to their citizens and use Correct pronoun usage
its best
same
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the same
caliber
for all other necessities as they do for Change the spelling
calibre
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economy
.
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the economy
To conclude
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all
, some Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
say that for Use synonyms
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government
other Correct article usage
the government
tasks
are equally important as Use synonyms
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economy
and I totally agree with that.Correct article usage
the economy
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