Question It is observed that today communication between family members in today’s times is less as compared to the past. However, some people do not think so. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often said that
nowdays
connections among Correct the word
nowadays
the
intimate families Correct article usage
apply
is
less in relation to the earlier. Change the verb form
are
However
, others have opposite ideas. I strongly agree with the first opinion and I will argue both perspectives as follows.
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To begin
with, in the past, Linking Words
people
lived in tandem in most of the time they did a plethora of Use synonyms
hardwork
with the help of each other. Correct your spelling
hard work
For instance
, when they wanted to construct something Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
house
, other folk Add an article
a house
make
Wrong verb form
made
contribution
to finish the work. Add an article
a contribution
This
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make
Change the verb form
makes
a
good communication around them. In Correct article usage
apply
additon
to Correct your spelling
addition
this
, most of the individuals were dependent on one another in the past Linking Words
becuase
their jobs were related to other parts of the family. What's more, there Correct your spelling
because
were
no indication of the technology and they had to do Change the verb form
was
many
stuff together.
Correct word choice
apply
In contrast
, Linking Words
todays
Change to a genitive case
today's
people
Use synonyms
Add a missing verb
are engaged
engaged
Wrong verb form
engage
with
Change preposition
in
a
Correct article usage
apply
humongeous
, and at times not important things, that Correct your spelling
humongous
makes
members of the family Correct subject-verb agreement
make
lives
miles away from home, so Correct subject-verb agreement
live
reduce
the intimate relationship between them. Correct subject-verb agreement
reduces
Furthermore
, with the Linking Words
advend
of the Correct your spelling
advent
technolgy
, especially by introducing Correct your spelling
technology
smart phone
many Correct your spelling
smartphone
people
will spend their time Use synonyms
involving
in trivial videos or other activities on social media. Wrong verb form
involved
This
is the chief reason that makes Linking Words
people
be apart in terms of physically and emotionally. Use synonyms
Also
, the hardship of living condition is another reason that cause individuals lives apart from each other engaging with their lifestyles Linking Words
as a result
it will Linking Words
dwingle
the Correct your spelling
dwindle
connetion
Correct your spelling
connection
amogst
them.
All things considered, I think the Correct your spelling
amongst
relashinships
and connections among Correct your spelling
relationships
people
nowadays Use synonyms
is
much less than in the past. Change the verb form
are
This
is Linking Words
due to
the Linking Words
introduce
the modern technology and Replace the word
introduction
economical
hard Correct word choice
apply
Correct word choice
economic condition
condition
.Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
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