The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.
The two maps illustrate the main changes in Lynwich
College
before and after its development in the present day. It is immediately noticeable that the
college
campus
became more built and facilitated over the period.
In addition
,
it is clear that
students can now choose from a wide range of transport options in order to access the
college
.
Also
, the car park has been reduced allowing for bike storage. The rebuilding of the
college
’s library and the construction of two new buildings – a cafeteria and sports centre – has greatly changed the layout of the
campus
. The cafeteria is now in a centralised area that connects both the academic and athletic corners with the improvements in transport facilities. In 2006, students were constricted by the mode of transportation used to arrive on
campus
with the availability of only a car park. At the present moment, there is a special area for bicycles and a bus stop has
also
been created on the road with a new path leading to the
campus
.
Overall
, we can see that a great deal of development has taken place at Lynwich
College
. There is now better access for students
as well as
improved sports and cafeteria facilities.
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