The table below shows social and economic indictators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations Statistics.

The table below shows social and economic indictators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations Statistics.
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The table illustrates the parameters of the social and economic conditions of four nations as per statistics from the United Nations in the year 1994.
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, we can identify that developing countries (Japan and
Canada
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) have the highest figures among the components,
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third-world countries scored the least in comparison in all four categories.
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and Japan have the highest annual income per person from an average 11,100 to $15,760, which is approximately a hundred times more than Peru and Angola’s annual income per person.
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, Japan has the highest life expectancy at birth, followed by
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with an age of 76. The opposite can be seen with
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with the highest average daily calorie consumption (3326)
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to its Japanese counterparts (2846). Both countries have experienced a near-perfect percentage of 99% in adult literacy rates respectively. In regards to third world nations, Peru’s annual average income is just $30 more than Angola's
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to its life expectancy of more than Angola by 5 years. The same can be said with Peruvian people consuming under 2000 calories, which is approximately 250 more than the Angolan population. The literacy rate is the lowest in Angola at just 34%, half of the adult literacy rate in Peru.
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