Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

yes
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i
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agree
to
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with
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this
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the
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fact that much money has been spent
for
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on
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repairing or for
the
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apply
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maintenance
for
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of
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the old
buildings
but to some extent
i
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believe that removing or vanishing the old
buildings
properly
are
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is
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not
the
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good idea as these old
buildings
are the symbols of our historical or traditional values so
according to
my knowledge or my belief we should repair these
buildings
or arrange the proper maintenance for these
buildings
time
to
time
to avoid the big cost at one
time
.
definately
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Definitely
today's world in modern world and technology is going on a hike in
now a days
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.
i
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also
agree that technology has provided as much ease and benefits in our daily
life
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lives
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but it
also
has
much
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consequences . but again talking about the fact that modern
buildings
are undoubtedly provide
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much attractions and comfort but developing modern
buildings
by removing or vanishing the old
buildings
is not a good idea because old
buildings
represent our traditional values and provide knowledge about the history of our country which will help new generations to stick with
thier
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their
roots , will let them know who they really are, what sacrifices their older generations have did to give them these freedoms and the world they are living now.
so
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in the end
i
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I
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will say
am
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I do
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not completely agree
to
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with
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this
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the
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fact that we should remove the old
buildings
completely but yes we should repair or arrange maintenance for these
buildings
time
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to
time
to save our cultural or historical values.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Preservation
  • Restoration
  • Demolition
  • Architectural heritage
  • Cultural significance
  • Tourist attraction
  • Urban landscape
  • Sustainability
  • Conservation
  • Economic benefits
  • Historical landmarks
  • Urban renewal
  • Infrastructure
  • Maintenance costs
  • Modern amenities
  • Building regulations
  • Community identity
  • Heritage conservation
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