In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

At present in certain nations, some family decides to raise their

first

offspring when they are more

muture

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mature

.

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essay will argue that the advantages of

this

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outweigh

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the drawbacks. The essay will

first

demonstrate that the older parent

likely

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to have

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suprior

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superior

stable

socioeconomic-status

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and have more time to spend with their

child

which can

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added cognitive benefits, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantages, namely

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risk of having detrimental health circumstances toward both mother and kid, is not valid. The primary merit of welcoming the

first

kid during advanced maternal age can significantly

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a positive impact in many aspects. Not only readiness of gradients, but

also

means

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the increasing of their earning potential as well.

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, if in the future their

child

would like to become a pianist,

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they can support their

child

's extracurricular activities by effort them a costly instrument and intensive courses to

fullfil

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fulfil

their desire in order to pursue their dreams.

Furthermore

, they are likely to have less

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about income or occupation security, so

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they tend to be more patient and can spend more valuable time with their baby. Even though those provide several positive impacts, it is widely recognised that those people who agree to have

first

children when they are aged,

this

can

also

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negative

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effects as well.

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, it

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influences

risk

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the risk

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of serious genetic

disease

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known as Down

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, which is related to pregnancy

women

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age equal to or above 35 years old.

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,

infant

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will experience

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premature birth, birth defects, and low birth weight.

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,

mother

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also

obtain

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risk

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of

gestitional

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gestational

diabetes,

gestitional

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gestational

hypertension, and postpartum depression.

Therefore

, both mother and

child

will have

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to

encouter

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encounter

with illness by physically and mentally.

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,

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in technology

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healthcare can tackle these issues. On balance, the fact that having

first

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child

during older age results in a stronger

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salary to

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the kids and parents will have more time to recreation with them precisely

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outweighs

outweights

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outweighs

the flawed argument that it impairs maternal and

child

's health