In many countries around the world, rural peoples are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there is an ongoing trend of

people

moving out of their hometowns in the rural

areas

to

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pursue

careers in the more populated

cities

.

This

tendency is negatively affecting many countries around the world

especially

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the developing ones. I think

this

phenomenon has a deleterious impact on the quality of life, the economy and the environment of both the rural and the central

areas

, and it will continue to do so as long as most

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jobs and opportunities are more distributed in the bigger towns. In the more populated

cities

, when an influx of

people

move to work, study and live there, accommodations become scarce and more expensive.

This

is clearly seen in slums where the number of

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is

conversely

proportional to the number of

people

. It will

also

bring about more criminal activities like theft and drug abuse,

as well as

more prevalence of contagious diseases.

Moreover

, environmental

pollutions

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worsened in busy

areas

where

people

consume more products and release more

wastes

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. An obvious example would be the PM 2.5 air pollution

that is

becoming a serious health threat in many capital

cities

with unsolved traffic congestions.

On the other hand

, when

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workforce is leaving the rural

areas

, a stagnation in suburban development will ensue. There would be less educated

people

living in the poorer

areas

to improve their towns in many aspects, including educational systems, jurisdiction systems, and security.

Furthermore

, there would be less labour to carry on agricultural work which is the major source of income in the faraway provinces.

To conclude

, I believe that too much

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migrational

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flow to the bigger

cities

contributes

many

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social problems both in the major

cities

and the rural

areas

.

This

problem should be emphasized and solutions should be made to distribute more jobs and opportunities to

people

in the country

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so that they can have good quality of life no matter where they live.