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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The advent of the
food
 industry, which made
easy
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it easy
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as
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and
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 suitable for the busy work schedule has more benefits,
such
 as
reduce
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reduced
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time
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the time
a time
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 for cooking and least
power
 consumption, which are included numerous negative effects,
such
 as
health related
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health-related
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 disorders,
as well as
 high expenditure, and
this
 essay will elaborate both
aspect
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aspects
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 to justify ho advantages superior to the disadvantages. On one hand, there are numerous pros are
consisted
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consist
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 of
this
 concept.
Firstly
, less time for preparing meals,
when
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When
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 someone wants to arrange
own
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their own
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 meals in
short
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a short
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 duration,
due to
 their busy
life
, there many
instant
 foods are available in the market to purchase, which
reduce
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reduces
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 their
preparing
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preparation
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 time.
Secondly
, as people tend to buy readymade and
instant
food
 ma decrease the usage of electricity or gas for cooking, which
influence
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influences
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 to low thee
expences
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expenses
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 on
power
 bills.
For instance
, with the higher usage of
junckey
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junk
 and
instant
food
 in most developed countries have been diminished
power
 bills almost every residence.
Although
 there are numerous pros included in
this
 phenomenon, a few drawbacks are available, which drastically affect
to
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apply
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the
individuals
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individual's
individuals'
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life
, which
life
 related disorders,
such
 as diabetes and heart diseases,
which
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that
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 not recover during
the
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apply
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life
.
Moreover
, buying
chemical added
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chemical-added
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food
 might increase the expenditure on meals even though they are
convenience
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convenient
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 to prepare on
daily
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a daily
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routing
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route
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.
For example
, consuming
ready–made
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ready–made
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 foods often
has
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have
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been
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influenced
negative
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negatively
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 way on
economy
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the economy
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 of the majority of families in developing countries,
such
 as Asian countries.
Hence
,
cons
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the cons
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 are supposed to be
strong
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stronger
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 than
benefits
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the benefits
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 of
this
 system.
To conclude
 vast number of people, who
spend
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have
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 busy
work-schedules
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work schedules
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consume more
instant
food
 as they convenient,
due to
 less time-consuming for preparation.
In addition
,
the
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with the
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 least
power
 usage, they would suffer from many adverse effects,
which
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apply
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influence
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influencing
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on
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apply
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their
life
,
such
 as disease and more expenses, which convince us that utilization of
this
 procedure
for
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in
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 the long run may impact negatively
are
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overshadowed by the positive developments.
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