The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The advent of the
food
industry, which made easy
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it easy
as
suitable for the busy work schedule has more benefits, Correct word choice
and
such
as reduce
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reduced
time
for cooking and least Add an article
the time
a time
power
consumption, which are included numerous negative effects, such
as health related
disorders, Add a hyphen
health-related
as well as
high expenditure, and this
essay will elaborate both aspect
to justify ho advantages superior to the disadvantages.
On one hand, there are numerous pros are Change to a plural noun
aspects
consisted
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consist
this
concept. Firstly
, less time for preparing meals, when
someone wants to arrange Capitalize word
When
own
meals in Correct pronoun usage
their own
short
duration, Correct article usage
a short
due to
their busy life
, there many instant
foods are available in the market to purchase, which reduce
their Correct subject-verb agreement
reduces
preparing
time. Replace the word
preparation
Secondly
, as people tend to buy readymade and instant
food
ma decrease the usage of electricity or gas for cooking, which influence
to low thee Correct subject-verb agreement
influences
expences
on Correct your spelling
expenses
power
bills. For instance
, with the higher usage of junckey
and Correct your spelling
junk
instant
food
in most developed countries have been diminished power
bills almost every residence.
Although
there are numerous pros included in this
phenomenon, a few drawbacks are available, which drastically affect to
the Change preposition
apply
individuals
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individual's
individuals'
life
, which life
related disorders, such
as diabetes and heart diseases, which
not recover during Correct pronoun usage
that
the
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apply
life
. Moreover
, buying chemical added
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chemical-added
food
might increase the expenditure on meals even though they are convenience
to prepare on Replace the word
convenient
daily
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a daily
routing
. Replace the word
route
For example
, consuming ready–made
foods often Add a hyphen
ready–made
has
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have
been
influenced Unnecessary verb
apply
negative
way on Change the word
negatively
economy
of the majority of families in developing countries, Add an article
the economy
such
as Asian countries. Hence
, cons
are supposed to be Correct article usage
the cons
strong
than Replace the word
stronger
benefits
of Correct article usage
the benefits
this
system.
To conclude
vast number of people, who spend
busy Verb problem
have
work-schedules
consume more Correct your spelling
work schedules
instant
food
as they convenient, due to
less time-consuming for preparation. In addition
, the
least Change preposition
with the
power
usage, they would suffer from many adverse effects, which
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apply
influence
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influencing
on
their Change preposition
apply
life
, such
as disease and more expenses, which convince us that utilization of this
procedure for
the long run may impact negatively Change preposition
in
are
overshadowed by the positive developments.Unnecessary verb
apply
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