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More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some believe that photographs are not a reliable source of news while other consider photographs to be irrefutable. Discuss both the views and your

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It is true that an increasing number of media houses use
photographs
 to validate their
news
 stories.
While
 some
people
 think
photographs
 are not a vital source of information others opine that their role in disseminating
news
 is indispensable. In my
opinion
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 using
photographs
 in the
news
 columns plays a very important role in stimulating interest among the readers and aids in easy understanding. On the one hand, some
people
 think that
photographs
 are not a valid source of
news
 for the simple reason that they can be doctored. In
this
 age of Photoshop and multimedia, there is no way we can be assured of the authenticity of images that we come across in newspapers and on the internet. In fact, there have been many instances when
photos
 were morphed or edited to taint the reputation of some well-known
people
. A morphed image looks original but
that is
 not the case. Countless celebrities and politicians have paid the price of fame by having their morphed images in compromising or unflattering positions published in glossies. Since
photos
 look truer than words, they do considerable harm and it is not always possible for a tainted person to regain their reputation.
Hence
, the argument that
photos
 are not a valid source of information certainly holds some water.
On the other hand
,
photos
 make the
story
 livelier. They arouse the interest of the reader and make them want to read the whole
story
.
Also
, we can never dismiss the fact that
photos
 capture the moments as they are and are an accurate representation of the event or the happening. Of course, they can be manipulated but in the absence of any manipulation, they are the ultimate truth. One has to admit that the vast majority of
photos
 published in newspapers are genuine and provide a clear picture of the
news
story
.
In addition
, readers are able to understand the
news
 easily when the
news
 stories are supported by
photos
.
To conclude
while
 it is true that
people
 have different views I believe
photographs
 in
news
 stories are indispensable as they not only kindle the interest
among
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 the readers but
also
 facilitate
easy
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 understanding of the
news
story
.
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