You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offe

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my positive response regarding the cookery class, which I followed. I completed my course
last
year. My name is Shaini Wasana and my candidade number is 79 in the 2023-A batch. I would like to inform you, that my favourite part of
this
class is the lesson on the decoration plates before serving them on the table.
Moreover
, the most joyful event was the food festival competition which was organised by you and your staff. It may help to build our strong relationship with each other. Not only It can lead to a vast experience But
also
gives the immense chance to communicate with the public. To be honest, I learnt about a variety of food styles including exotic
as well as
local tastes. I
also
have done about 200 recipes for the
last
6 months.
Besides
this
, I have prepared about 20 delicious desserts
according to
my method If the seats are available for next year, I would love to join your next cake class. Because I strive to start my own business I think
this
will help me. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Shai.
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