If the
children
should be punished because of the
crime
they
or their
parents
should be responsible for it is a very controversial point that
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social society. I contend that punishment for
children
is necessary because of the need
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, education and realization. Despite the
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to their bad
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.
It is
that
children
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and parent’s control is not absolute. They can be affected by many things like their relationships, friends,
,… in both positive and negative ways.
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can make their
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unpredictable and easily
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control despite all of their efforts, especially with
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adolescence
adolescents
adolescent
.
Due to
this
, many crimes are
by
children
without parent’s
or warning.
However
, it is believed by many people that the
parents
are responsible for
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kids’ crimes. They
that the bad
behavior
also
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that
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them badly and
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not
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enough
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. It is true that
parents
play a crucial role in
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behavior
, but having
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education
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not make
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commit a
crime
but the final decision
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to them, not their
parents
.
For example
, a child with
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education can
also
commit a
crime
,
of his /her own idea of right and wrong and many things else.
The writer’s opinion is that
children
can be
and accepting punishment can help them grow up and
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their realization of right and wrong.
It is clear that
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, but it can help
children
to learn from their
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. Being strict can make them afraid,
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again.
Moreover
, it
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them what is right and wrong ,
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and how serious
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is.
Despite the fact it is
that
parents
are
for the
crime
by their
children
, there is no doubt that
children
should be punished for their own
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, helping them to avoid bad
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and
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their
of
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they are
for. There are, it should have been shown that it is important for
children
to take