Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

If the

children

should be punished because of the

crime

they

commited

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committed

or their

parents

should be responsible for it is a very controversial point that

have

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always

be

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dicussed

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discussed

by

the

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social society. I contend that punishment for

children

is necessary because of the need

of

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for

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responbility

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responsibility

, education and realization. Despite the

agruement

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agreement

argument

that parent’s teaching

lead

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leads

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to their bad

behavior

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behaviour

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. It is

obivious

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obvious

that

children

have a very sensitive and curious

mind

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minds

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and parent’s control is not absolute. They can be affected by many things like their relationships, friends,

environtment

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environment

,… in both positive and negative ways.

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can make their

behavior

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behaviour

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extremly

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extremely

unpredictable and easily

over come

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overcome

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parents

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parents'

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control despite all of their efforts, especially with

adolescene

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adolescence

adolescents

adolescent

.

Due to

this

, many crimes are

commnited

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committed

by

children

without parent’s

attetion

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attention

or warning.

However

, it is believed by many people that the

parents

are responsible for

theirs

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kids’ crimes. They

agrue

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argue

agree

that the bad

behavior

also

mean

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means

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that

parents

teached

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taught

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them badly and

do

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did

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not

have

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make

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enough

efforts

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. It is true that

parents

play a crucial role in

children

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children's

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behavior

, but having

bad

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a bad

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education

do

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does

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not make

children

to

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commit a

crime

but the final decision

is belong

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belongs

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to them, not their

parents

.

For example

, a child with

good

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education can

also

commit a

crime

,

becaue

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because

of his /her own idea of right and wrong and many things else. The writer’s opinion is that

children

can be

immatrue

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immature

and accepting punishment can help them grow up and

fixing

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fix

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their realization of right and wrong.

It is clear that

being punished is a

horible

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horrible

though

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thought

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, but it can help

children

to learn from their

mistake

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mistakes

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. Being strict can make them afraid,

help

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and help

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them avoid

from

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apply

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commiting

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committing

crime

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crimes

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again.

Moreover

, it

teach

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teaches

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them what is right and wrong ,

know

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knows

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the consequence they are facing

to

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apply

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and how serious

they

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their

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behavior

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behaviour

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is. Despite the fact it is

agrued

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argued

that

parents

are

resposible

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responsible

for the

crime

commited

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committed

by their

children

, there is no doubt that

children

should be punished for their own

crime

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crimes

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, helping them to avoid bad

behavior

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behaviour

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and

rasing

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raising

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their

awaraness

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awareness

of

crime

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the crime

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they are

resposible

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responsible

for. There are, it should have been shown that it is important for

children

to take

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responsibility

responbility

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responsibility