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The table illustrates the predicted costing over the next 5 years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. While the pie chart shows the projectured expenditure breakdown allocation for the only first year as the projects are set up.

The table illustrates the predicted costing over the next 5 years in American dollars for three environmental projects for sustainable forestry. While the pie chart shows the projectured expenditure breakdown allocation for the only first year as the projects are set up.
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The table compares, the
overall
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 cost for sustainable forestry over the next 5 years for the environmental projects in
West
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Africa
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, Central
America
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 and Southeast
Asia
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 in American dollars and
then
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 the pie chart describes, the expenditure breakdown in
Year
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 1. To summarize, in the given period the cost prediction increased in
West
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Africa
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 and Central
America
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whereas
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, Southeast
Asia
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 decreased. In
year
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 1, the total cost assumption in
West
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Africa
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 was 10.5
million
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while
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,
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 Central
America
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 and Southeast
Asia
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 were 20
million
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 and 30
million
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 orderly.
However
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, in the
year
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 2, all the three environmental projects rapidly reduced.
Further
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, in
year
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 3, Southeast
Asia
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 gradually increased to 40
million
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 and is predicted to continuously increase to 50
million
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 in
year
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 4 and remain same in the
year
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 5.
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, the environmental projects in
West
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Africa
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 and Central
America
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 slightly slowed down in the years 3 and 4. From there, in the
year
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 5,
West
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Africa
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 alone rose but Central
America
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 stood the same. Turning to the pie chart, in
Year
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 1 the projected expenditure on employee salaries was 50%.
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, set-up costs, training and office expenses were 30%, 10% and 10% admittedly.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words west, africa, america, asia, year, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Projected costing
  • Sustainable forestry
  • Environmental projects
  • Expenditure breakdown
  • Financial commitment
  • Allocation of funds
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Deforestation
  • Technological advancements
  • Policy changes
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