The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
magazines
sold per people
Overall
the number of newspapers in 2000 was the highest in the first 3 countries, but in countries D and E was the lowest.
To begin
, bucolic B had 50 magazines
per person in 2000. However
, it fell to 45 newspapers in 2020. Homey D seems to have the opposite trend to Provincial B which had 18 magazines
per person in the first year then
upward to 22 after 20 years. Country E only had 4 magazines
per person in 2000 then
rose to 6 magazines
in 2010. however
, it downward to 4 after 10 years.Submitted by trung642k6 on
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