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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of CO2 per person in four different countries (United
Kingdom
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,Sweden, Italy and Portugal)which were emitted over 40
years
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 from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric
tonnes
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.
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, It is obvious that the emissions of the United
Kingdom
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 and Sweden declined over the period given,
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 for Italy and Portugal, they rose. Within a time span of forty
years
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, the United
Kingdom
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 was the country
which
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 emitted the most carbon dioxide. With regards to the CO2 that the United
Kingdom
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 emitted, it began at nearly 15 metric
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 and
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 slightly decreased to nine metric
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 in the
last
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 year.
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, almost nine metric
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 rose slowly and roughly reached the peak after which the figure dropped progressively to a low of five metric
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 in 2007.
On the other hand
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, the emission in Italy started from approximately five metric
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 and was followed by a ceiling trend to eight metric
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 between 1967 and 1997 before remanding the same in 2007.
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, about two metric
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 were emitted in the first year which reached a high of just over four metric
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 ten
years
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 later and grew steadily in the final
years
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 to just over five metre
tonnes
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 in 2007.
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