Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
people
think that resigning to the gym
is the
useful plan to keep fit, Correct article usage
a
while
others think that there are more effective way
to do it. I Fix the agreement mistake
ways
agree
the former because the Add the preposition
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toagree
withagree
gym
is the place where people
can be trained effectively due to
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a proffesional
proffesional
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professional
coach
's lesson
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lessons
whereas
there are still some people
have
more effective exercises Correct pronoun usage
who have
help
them keep fit by themselves.
Fix the infinitive
to help
To begin
with, many belive
that going to the training court is the best plan to stay fit. Because not only there are many Correct your spelling
believe
people
have
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who have
the
wide knowledge Correct article usage
a
at
training but Change preposition
of
also
the coach
help
you a lot with it. The Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
explaination
for Correct your spelling
explanation
this
is that you may cause
some negative effects on your body if you train in the wrong Verb problem
have
way
. For example
, my neighbor
next to my house Change the spelling
neighbour
do
Correct subject-verb agreement
does
exercise
Wrong verb form
exercises
such
as runing
, Correct your spelling
running
Correct word choice
and swiming
swiming
Correct your spelling
swimming
everyday
to keep fit but there is a day he is very exhausted and Replace the word
every day
fell
down.
Wrong verb form
falls
On the other hand
, there are some individuals have
the thought that there are better Correct pronoun usage
who have
way
to keep in shape. Because some Fix the agreement mistake
ways
people
have more effective exercise and do not need coach's
help. To explain, some study about health and know the best Correct article usage
a coach's
way
for them to keep fit. Each person have
their own health problem and the Correct subject-verb agreement
has
gym
's coach
may not recognise
, so they can solve it and find Correct pronoun usage
itrecognise
the
Correct article usage
a
way
to keep fit for themselves. The result of it is that they have more time to study, relax and also
stay fit too.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that many believe that going to the gym
is most
useful Correct article usage
the most
way
, some think their own exercise is better. I agree with the former due to
training with the coach
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