*Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social,and commercial, perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Nowadays,

children

's

pressures

from academic, social and commercial increased. In

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the causes and a possible solution for

this

issue

. There are some reasons behind

children

's

pressures

.

Firstly

, the

families

predicted

from

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their

children's

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children

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to become perfect in their academic

life

and get

a

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apply

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high marks in all subjects.

However

, if the

chilled

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not

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is not

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great in one subject

such

as math he or she will

fell

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fall

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under

pressure

.

For instance

, the survey done in 2023

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at Sultan

Qaboss

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Qaboos

university

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showed that 90%o of students

exhausted

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are exhausted

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because of their

families

and

society

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society's

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expectations.

that

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means, students are not allowed to lose marks in school even though they are suffering.

Therefore

, it seems logical that

childrens

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children

facing

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more

pressures

nowadays.

Secondly

, the employment institutions are asking for

highly

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degrees.so, the jobs are for those with skills and certifications.

while

,

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others are spending their

life

seeking

for

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job

opportunity

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opportunities

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.

For example

,

according to

Oman TV people without certificates

how

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who

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own a position in a company are less than 5%.

Childrens

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Children

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rises in

society

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a society

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that respect and gives opportunity based on

the

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their

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degrees and

this

led

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leads

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them to

exhausting

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exhaustion

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.

On the other hand

, there are some

idea

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ideas

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to solve

this

issue

.

Firstly

,

families

and

society

should respect

children

's age and be aware of the dangers of the

pressure

so they can avoid

this

problem.

Thus

, give the

childrens

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children

the right to

life

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live

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their childhood and

excepted

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accept

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their differences.

In addition

, the governments could

also

ask parents to support their

children's

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children

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in

flexible

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a flexible

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way.

For example

,

in

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apply

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a survey done

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by at

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at

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a

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public magazine showed that parents how aware of the

childrens

pressures

their child

life

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live

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a normal

life

.

whereas

, others who are unaware and ask their child to get a perfectionist most of them

fell

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feel

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under

pressure

.

Finally

, all of

the

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apply

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society

must work together to reduce

this

issue

. In conclusion,

society

and

families

require

from

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apply

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children's

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children

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to work hard

not

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no

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matter if they are suffering

this

led

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leads

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to

pressure

issue

and to decline

this

problem they should be

awared

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aware

awarded

and

love

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loved

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and

except

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accept

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that

children

's ability is different from one child to another.