The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram illustrates the process of hydroelectric electricity generation in a special station.
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, it is evident that the process consists of 4 quite simple stages, beginning with the
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flow and ending with the transfer of the generated power through Power lines at daylight and the reversed process during the night.
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the first step, the
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from the river and high-level reservoir. flows through an intake beneath the dam to the main generator during the day. Following that, the
water
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flow rotates the reversible turbines to lead them to operation and electricity generation; and in the final step, the hydroelectric power is transferred to the national grid by means of lines
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are designed for
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purpose. During the night, the station works in reverse. At night, the turbines' function is to pimp the
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from the low-level reservoir to the High-level reservoir,
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the dam’s intake is closed in order to prevent the
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flow from the high-level source to the turbines.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • turbine
  • generate electricity
  • transmit
  • low-level reservoir
  • high-level reservoir
  • dam
  • cycle of electricity production
  • energy storage
  • flowing water
  • sustainability
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