The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.
The given table represents information on the best
countries
for international tourism over two time periods.
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that all country’s visitors uplifted from 1.3 to 3.2 Linking Words
million
,except China.
It can be clearly observed that France was at its peak of all time with 167.7 Use synonyms
million
visitors, Use synonyms
however
, the USA had the biggest amount of money from tourists, it is approximately 270 billion dollars.Linking Words
Whereas
the smallest quantity of humans who travel was in Italy, Linking Words
furthermore
the number did not reach 100 Linking Words
million
people.
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Moreover
, it could be noticed that both Linking Words
countries
China and Italy did not exceed the number of tourists 60 Use synonyms
million
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furthermore
, the sum of these two Linking Words
countries
is equal to the budget of one country USA.
It is interesting to note that the year 2013 Use synonyms
also
shows that all Linking Words
countries
were uplifted by visitors.
It is apparently seen that from the beginning until the end only China declined by 2 per cent.Use synonyms
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