Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, staying fit has

became

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a broad issue in the world. There are plenty of individuals

believing

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who believe

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that going to the

gym

is the greatest

way

to

have

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a

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physically fit. Others think that we can keep fit by

variety

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a variety

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of efficiency treatments. Personally,

this

writer gravitates

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idea that going to the

gym

is the best

way

to keep fit. First and foremost, it is widely acknowledged that there are more effective methods. A very important point to consider is that there are not

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enough services and facilities for

people

to use

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another method

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to practice.

This

means that

people

just buy weights to lift to improve their muscles and they forget to buy workout

equipment

for

whole

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the whole

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body.

In other words

, the

equipment

which

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that

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we buy is not as effective as it

in

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the

gym

. Another point worth

consideration

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is that they just use cheap

equipment

they buy in the shop because it is

cheper

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cheaper

than that in the

gym

.

As a result

, it

does

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is

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not effective and

waste

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money. To illustrate

this

point, take as a prime example, nowadays we can buy easily

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

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in

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on

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the

internet

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.

However

, nobody

assure

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assures

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how

the

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effective is.

Therfore

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, many

people

get bored

an d

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and

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give up

to practice

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on practicing

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.

On the other hand

, there are several arguments in

favor

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favour

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of the idea that going to the

gym

is the best

way

to keep fit. It is

also

convincing to realise that it

help

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helps

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us to strengthen

health

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our health

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and it is

also

effortless to have a good relationship in

excercising

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exercising

.

Besides

, when we go to the

gym

, we

also

have you to grasp the operation of the

equipment

. A specific example of

this

is that

,

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people

always choose to go to the

gym

rather than using

another methods

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another method

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so they have a fit body swiftly. In conclusion, the aforementioned facts have created a dilemma when

people

evaluate the impact of

this

issue, and it

still

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a controversial issue. As far as I am concerned, I think that the best

way

to stay fit is

going

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to go

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to the

gym

.