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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbian island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbian island between 2010 and 2017.
#tourists #caribbian #island
The line graph illustrates the many people
travel
Wrong verb form
travelled
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 to a particular Caribbean
Island
 between 2010 and 2017 .The horizontal axis shows the years and the vertical axis explains the
numbers
Fix the agreement mistake
number
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 of
visitors
.
To begin
 with ,in 2010 ,below 0.5
million
visitors
 were staying on cruise ships .In 2011 ,
increasing
Correct article usage
an increasing
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were
Verb problem
number of
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visitors
on
Change preposition
to
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ship
Add an article
the ship
a ship
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.
In
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From
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 2011 to 2012 ,the
figure
 was
decline
Wrong verb form
declined
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 and steadily rose over the five years to reach
at
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apply
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2
million
 in 2017 .Next , below 1
million
visitors
 were staying on
island
 in 2010 .That was gradually increasing
in
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from
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 2011 to 2015 .
In
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From
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 2015 to 2016 ,the
figure
was
Verb problem
apply
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decline
Wrong verb form
declined
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 but in 2017, 1.5
million
 people
were staying
Wrong verb form
stayed
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 on
island
Add an article
the island
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.
In addition
, the total number of
visitors
figure
 began at 1
million
point
Change to a plural noun
points
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.That
figure
 was climbed in 2010 to 2015. The following years 2015 to 2016, the
figure
 was reducing and rapidly rose over the next year to reach 3.5
million
 in 2017.
Overall
 ,3.5
million
visitors
 were visiting on
caribbian
Correct your spelling
Caribbean
island
 from 2010 to 2017.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, million, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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