In the future all cars, buses, trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages ?

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Nowadays, engineers try to build many technological devices
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can relieve human beings from mental and physical pressure. Driverless vehicles are one type of update system by using that we would get many advantages. Though people will get some benefits , they will
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disadvantages too. In my opinion, the facilities of automated
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unable to outweigh the challenges. At
first,
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Auto-regulate cars just follow the instructions that are provided by the technician. it has no capability to take any decision in a short moment that will be beneficial.
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to take
medical
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emergency , It can not
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work properly
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long
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line of traffic. But when a driver
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the buses, they can use
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route to go fast.
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,
auto-engines
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auto engines
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faces
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many
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unexpected
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as
it
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can not do anything without the given rules. In case of crossing a road by an old person or child , It will make an untoward luck for him.
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, if a vehicle change the normal route , it will make
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with
automoving
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auto moving
automotive
materials. Though it has numerous demerits , it has a number of merits too
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In
upcoming
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days,
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advantages
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the advantages
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of
automachines
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auto machines
, dwellers can reach their destination timely. As the conveys maintain the rules without any difficulties, Inhabitants
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not need to keep an eye
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it rather they can relax the moments by sleeping or gossiping with their partners.
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, they can hear news, music or
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watch
movies without any hesitation. If it faces any obstacles, it will auto-break by itself
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that
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is very crucial to get mental peace.
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, I think that driverless
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are not count
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as good accessories , as it has many
disanility
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disability
and limitations.
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reason, I may consider that
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the benefits of automated vehicles
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unable to outweigh the demerits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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