You are working in a company. You would like to join a training course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter:- – describe what course you would like to do – how this course might help in your work – suggest a suitable time for you to do this course

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
to notify you about the
course
that I would like to join. I have been feeling for a long time that I am not very good at handling
food
safely.
Therefore
, I would like to join a
food
safety training
course
. The duration of the
course
is three weeks and the admission fee is $100 which is not very high I think. In my opinion,
this
training will make a lot of difference in my performance as
this
module includes a variety of lessons that will help me in the workplace regarding
food
handling.
Moreover
, we are expecting a
food
safety audit in the next few months
therefore
,
this
course
is a must for me to take as a shift lead. I am ready to take lessons after work in the evenings as I do not have a very hectic schedule these days. I hope the company will pay any fees as
this
should be a free module for their workers. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Gill
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