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You are working in a company. You would like to join a training course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter:- – describe what course you would like to do – how this course might help in your work – suggest a suitable time for you to do this course

#company #course #work #employer #time
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 to notify you about the
course
 that I would like to join. I have been feeling for a long time that I am not very good at handling
food
 safely.
Therefore
, I would like to join a
food
 safety training
course
. The duration of the
course
 is three weeks and the admission fee is $100 which is not very high I think. In my opinion,
this
 training will make a lot of difference in my performance as
this
 module includes a variety of lessons that will help me in the workplace regarding
food
 handling.
Moreover
, we are expecting a
food
 safety audit in the next few months
therefore
,
this
course
 is a must for me to take as a shift lead. I am ready to take lessons after work in the evenings as I do not have a very hectic schedule these days. I hope the company will pay any fees as
this
 should be a free module for their workers. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Gill
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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