You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the epoch of competition encircling, working

parents

have become an indubitable social phenomenon.

For

this

reason, couples would like to earn a lot of money to support their loved ones.

Additionally

,

although

the phenomenon is common, it does cause arguments from the citizens. It is often said that it benefits the next generations,

while

the opposition has expressed their worry about children's well-being

due to

parents

' absence. The essay will present some benefits and drawbacks for two-side opinions, and share my personal experiences supporting my standpoint. First and furthermost, a compelling merit of working

parents

is that income is an unquestionable fact.

Accordingly

, money is an inevitable factor when

parents

nurture their babies. Namely, a vast number of activities need to pay a large amount of funding, including education (e.g., fees of Kindergarten, Primary Schools, High Schools, and Colleges), and essential goods (e.g., food, drinks, clothes, shelters, transportation). After all, these activities need

parents

to try their best to get money to support their children's physical needs.

Nevertheless

, Working

parents

also

have an undeniable Achilles heel, which can cause unhealthy psychological status.

Accordingly

, the lack of companionship between

parents

and the next generation definitely leads to varied negative feelings, like indifference, loneliness, and even hatred.

Furthermore

, both negative feelings for their

parents

and the lack of education definitely result in

behaviour

Replace the word

behavioural

show examples

problems for children and teenagers, including the incubus of kindergarteners, indecent

behaviour

of pupils, and even bullying

behaviour

of higher school students;

hence

the absence of support from

parents

impair the younger's psychology. In my opinion, I totally use my experience as a good example to prove the disadvantages of working

parents

. I was given a punishment for my physical bullying

behaviour

to one of my classmates from high school, because my

parents

did not have enough time to teach me how to express negative emotions, like irate, in a proper way. All things considered,

although

my

parents

do provide a good living standard, I met

behaviour

problems afflicting me for a long time, even when I became an adult. In summary, it is intensively arduous for

parents

to balance jobs and caring.

However

, both physical and psychological health are imperative

parents

' duties. All in all, I am convinced that parenting is the most difficult position in the world.