In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the epoch of competition encircling, working

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have become an indubitable social phenomenon.

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reason, couples would like to earn a lot of money to support their loved ones.

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the phenomenon is common, it does cause arguments from the citizens. It is often said that it benefits the next generations,

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the opposition has expressed their worry about children's well-being

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' absence. The essay will present some benefits and drawbacks for two-side opinions, and share my personal experiences supporting my standpoint. First and furthermost, a compelling merit of working

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is that income is an unquestionable fact.

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, money is an inevitable factor when

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nurture their babies. Namely, a vast number of activities need to pay a large amount of funding, including education (e.g., fees of Kindergarten, Primary Schools, High Schools, and Colleges), and essential goods (e.g., food, drinks, clothes, shelters, transportation). After all, these activities need

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to try their best to get money to support their children's physical needs.

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, Working

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have an undeniable Achilles heel, which can cause unhealthy psychological status.

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, the lack of companionship between

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and the next generation definitely leads to varied negative feelings, like indifference, loneliness, and even hatred.

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, both negative feelings for their

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and the lack of education definitely result in

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problems for children and teenagers, including the incubus of kindergarteners, indecent

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of pupils, and even bullying

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of higher school students;

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the absence of support from

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impair the younger's psychology. In my opinion, I totally use my experience as a good example to prove the disadvantages of working

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. I was given a punishment for my physical bullying

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to one of my classmates from high school, because my

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did not have enough time to teach me how to express negative emotions, like irate, in a proper way. All things considered,

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do provide a good living standard, I met

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problems afflicting me for a long time, even when I became an adult. In summary, it is intensively arduous for

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to balance jobs and caring.

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, both physical and psychological health are imperative

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' duties. All in all, I am convinced that parenting is the most difficult position in the world.