Government should spend money on railways rather than roads to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement

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In the modern
era
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transportation has become an essential part of everyday life
while
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railways
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and
roads
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is
one
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of the best two medium among all the mode of
transportations
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transportation
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.
Overall
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,
This
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eaasy agress
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essay agrees
with the
statements
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statement
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to
investing
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invest
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more currency in the railroad
compare
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compared
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to
roads
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beause
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because
of Safe
journey
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journeys
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and
low costing
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low-cost
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travel
of
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for
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human
being
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beings
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as well as
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goods.
Firstly
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, From the very beginning of
conduction
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the conduction
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of
railways
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is
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it
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more safe
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safer
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than
normal
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the normal
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road
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roads
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.
In addition
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,
rail
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track
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tracks
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are safe
bacuse
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because
of in
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apply
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one
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track is
use
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used
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only
use
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apply
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for
one
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vehicle at a time.
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, the
roads
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are
uses
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used
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by many cars and they
oftenly
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often
faces
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face
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accidents.
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, there are thousands of accidents
occurs
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in the roadway on the
otherside
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other side
there are a few
number of
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apply
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accidents
happened
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happening
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in
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on
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the
rail
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track.
Secondly
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, the cost of
among
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apply
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these two ways is much cheaper in
railways
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in comparison to
bus
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buses
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or private
vehicle
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vehicles
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.
Moreover
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,
one
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Rail
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carries
a lots
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of people and a huge amount of goods at a single coach. As a
reult
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result
the expenditure of movements and product shift
frome
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from
one
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place to another is reduced
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compared
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to
other process
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another process
other processes
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of medium.
For Example
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, All Coach of a
Rail
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could carry on an average 10-20 buses
passenger
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passengers
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10
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and 10
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-20 tracks of goods.
To Conclude
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,
Spend
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Spending
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money
in
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on
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railways
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compare
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compared
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to
roads
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is more convenient and
benificials
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beneficial
for the reasons
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whereas
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of
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increase
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the increase
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of
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in
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security and
decline
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the decline
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of
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in
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price.
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