Improvements in health, education, and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For developing

unpreviledge

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unprivileged

countries

, education, health and business improvements is vital. These

nations

should

recieved

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received

receive

help from richer

countrie's

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countries

governments

. I disagree with

this

statement and I think poorer

countries

have to improve their living standard and facilities.

Firstly

, the

governments

of developing and poorer

countries

should be aware of their

citizens

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problems. By implementing some job opportunities

such

as building new factories and local stores, and

contribute

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individuals to work in these locations, most

of

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the

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families would gain

this

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ability to send their children to school. In order to do that, the literacy rate of society would significantly decrease.

Additionally

, constructing some good hospitals in

countryside

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and rural areas and a

rutine

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routine

plan for

vaccinate

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all

of

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the

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infants and children could be an effective approach

for

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increasing the health problem in poorer societies. The amount of money which is

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for building

hospital

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a hospital

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can be spent

of

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taxayion

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taxation

which is given

from

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the richer group of people

such

as

business

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businesses

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mans

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men

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and traders.

However

, some believe the

governments

of developed

nations

such

as

United

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states

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and

Britian

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Britain

can avoid

of

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war in poorer

nations

and send some labour

forcements

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enforcement

enforcements

, in order to improve the quality of

live

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in these regions.

Although

this

could be an effective idea, I think the

concouil

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council

of the developing

nations

can trade their goods with developed ones.

For instance

, most of the African

countries

have some

fuels

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mines

such

as gas and petrol and some valuable metals

such

as gold and silver. If

these kind

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of valuable things trade with the requesters, a good amount of money will enter the country. In conclusion, the

governments

of poorer

nations

should be worried about their

citizens

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quality of

lives

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life

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. They can create new job opportunities and

high quality

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hospitals and put their

citizens

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prioroties

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priorities

top

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of themselves .