Improvements in health, education, and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
For developing
unpreviledge
Correct your spelling
unprivileged
countries
, education, health and business improvements is vital. These Use synonyms
nations
should Use synonyms
recieved
help from richer Correct your spelling
received
receive
countrie's
Correct your spelling
countries
governments
. I disagree with Use synonyms
this
statement and I think poorer Linking Words
countries
have to improve their living standard and facilities.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, the Linking Words
governments
of developing and poorer Use synonyms
countries
should be aware of their Use synonyms
citizens
problems. By implementing some job opportunities Change to a genitive case
citizen's
citizens'
such
as building new factories and local stores, and Linking Words
contribute
individuals to work in these locations, most Wrong verb form
contributing
of
Change preposition
apply
the
families would gain Correct article usage
apply
Linking Words
this
ability to send their children to school. In order to do that, the literacy rate of society would significantly decrease. Correct determiner usage
the
Additionally
, constructing some good hospitals in Linking Words
countryside
and rural areas and a Add an article
the countryside
rutine
plan for Correct your spelling
routine
vaccinate
all Wrong verb form
vaccinating
of
Change preposition
apply
the
infants and children could be an effective approach Correct article usage
apply
for
increasing the health problem in poorer societies. The amount of money which is Change preposition
to
need
for building Wrong verb form
needed
hospital
can be spent Correct article usage
a hospital
of
Change preposition
on
taxayion
which is given Correct your spelling
taxation
from
the richer group of people Change preposition
to
such
as Linking Words
business
Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
mans
and traders.
Correct your spelling
men
However
, some believe the Linking Words
governments
of developed Use synonyms
nations
Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
United
Correct article usage
the United
states
and Capitalize word
States
Britian
can avoid Correct your spelling
Britain
of
war in poorer Change preposition
apply
nations
and send some labour Use synonyms
forcements
, in order to improve the quality of Correct your spelling
enforcement
enforcements
live
in these regions. Replace the word
life
Although
Linking Words
this
could be an effective idea, I think the Linking Words
concouil
of the developing Correct your spelling
council
nations
can trade their goods with developed ones. Use synonyms
For instance
, most of the African Linking Words
countries
have some Use synonyms
fuels
mines Change the noun form
fuel
such
as gas and petrol and some valuable metals Linking Words
such
as gold and silver. If Linking Words
these kind
of valuable things trade with the requesters, a good amount of money will enter the country.
In conclusion, the Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
governments
of poorer Use synonyms
nations
should be worried about their Use synonyms
citizens
quality of Change noun form
citizen's
citizens'
lives
. They can create new job opportunities and Fix the agreement mistake
life
high quality
hospitals and put their Add a hyphen
high-quality
citizens
Change noun form
citizen's
citizens'
prioroties
Correct your spelling
priorities
top
of themselves .Change preposition
on top
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