on the recent holiday you lost a valueble items. fourtuntly you have travel insurance to coverd of anythink lots dscribe items you lots how you lost it who you liked insurance company do you for

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Dear Sir & Madam, I am writing
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letter to inform you recently I had
travel
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to Mumbai to Canada for business travels. At the time of
travel
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, I was carrying my office
laptop
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as well as
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my personal
laptop
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at the time of landing I had lost my personal
laptop
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bag on a flight to Canadian airport. My seat number is A12 my flight number is 124586 Mumbai to Canada. I had Spock multiple times with airport authority
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customer care but still I did it receive my
laptop
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On the date of
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my company provided me with
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insurance from your company, I had an insurance copy it was a very costly item for me
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it is covered in my
travel
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insurance please please provide me resubmit for
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for your reference I am providing my looptop bill and mu mail commutation with screenshot either airport authority please help me for
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it was very imported t me without looptop I can’t be doing my personal woke If anything other document is required from my side please let me know please reword me on the same mail. Regard, Akanksha
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