Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is argued by several
people
that the great way to put people
together from different cultures
and demographics is music
. According to
this
statement, I disagree entirely and in this
particular essay, I will explain more about this
opinion.
In fact, the popularity of music
has never been drowning for several years. From country music
to K-pop music
in this
modern day, it is believed that there is space for music
popularity in people
’s life
. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
However
, there is a difference in which music
genre that popular among the generation. Old generations
most likely prefer slow music
such
as classical music
, because when they want to listen
Add the preposition
tolisten
music
, it means they want to enjoy their life in peace. In contrast
, young generations
commonly listen
EDM Add the preposition
tolisten
Music
at high volume because they are listening to music
for a party. Therefore
, it looks hard to use music
to bring people
of all ages together in one place because of the different tastes and purposes of listening to music
.
Furthermore
, in terms of people
from different culture, music
is not a good tool for putting people
with different culture together in one room, because each culture also
have
a different genre and tone. Change the verb form
has
For example
, people
who come from Java, Indonesia more likely to listen
slow Add the preposition
tolisten
music
with gamelan or angklung as instruments. Meanwhile, people
who are not from Java feel gamelan or angklung with slow music
is not enjoyable. Hence
, differences in music
tastes among people
from different cultures
hard to congregate together in a room.
In conclusion, I believe that music
is not a way to bring people
from different cultures
and generations
together. It is because people
from different generations
have different tastes in music
, and people
from different cultures
have their own views of music
's purpose.Submitted by zakiyaartanti19 on
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