Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued by several
people
that the great way to put
people
together from different
cultures
and demographics is
music
.
According to
this
statement, I disagree entirely and in
this
particular essay, I will explain more about
this
opinion. In fact, the popularity of
music
has never been drowning for several years. From country
music
to K-pop
music
in
this
modern day, it is believed that there is space for
music
popularity in
people
’s
life
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.
However
, there is a difference in which
music
genre that popular among the generation. Old
generations
most likely prefer slow
music
such
as classical
music
, because when they want to
listen
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music
, it means they want to enjoy their life in peace.
In contrast
, young
generations
commonly
listen
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EDM
Music
at high volume because they are listening to
music
for a party.
Therefore
, it looks hard to use
music
to bring
people
of all ages together in one place because of the different tastes and purposes of listening to
music
.
Furthermore
, in terms of
people
from different culture,
music
is not a good tool for putting
people
with different culture together in one room, because each culture
also
have
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a different genre and tone.
For example
,
people
who come from Java, Indonesia more likely to
listen
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slow
music
with gamelan or angklung as instruments. Meanwhile,
people
who are not from Java feel gamelan or angklung with slow
music
is not enjoyable.
Hence
, differences in
music
tastes among
people
from different
cultures
hard to congregate together in a room. In conclusion, I believe that
music
is not a way to bring
people
from different
cultures
and
generations
together. It is because
people
from different
generations
have different tastes in
music
, and
people
from different
cultures
have their own views of
music
's purpose.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural diversity
  • harmony
  • integration
  • bridging gaps
  • foster
  • ignite
  • embrace
  • communicate
  • celebrate
  • appreciate
  • inclusivity
  • universal language
  • emotional resonance
  • shared experiences
  • intercultural dialogue
  • intergenerational connections
  • cultural exchange
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