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Tourism is an ever-growing industry. what benefit do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

#tourism #industry #benefit #individuals #society
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It is admittedly true that
tourism
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 is
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a statistic
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statistic
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 industry for most
of
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the
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nations but the
tourism
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 sector is the main income for lots of countries
such
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 as the UAE, Qatar, and Saudi Arabia. In
this
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how
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on how
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 individuals and
society
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 benefit from
tourism
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. On the one hand,
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tourism
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the tourism
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 sector is a profitable business for a nation. It not only help a country's GDP but
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 give opportunity for new jobs for
society
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.
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, The UAE is a successful example for
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tourism
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the tourism
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sectors
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sector
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, where continuously GDP growing only for visitors.
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, most
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visitors stay
4
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- 5 days, where they spend
minimum
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 of 10000-10,000 USD. Not only products have an extra tax for
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 but
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 food.
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,
society
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 and
people
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 benefit from
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sectors
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such
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 as local
people
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's shops, restaurants and hotels, where visitors visit most of the time and buy products. Other side,
society
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's individuals
able
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 to invest money because they benefit from
tourism
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 and they are
open
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opening
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 new organizations that help to create new jobs for
society
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people
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.
Secondly
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, the
tourism
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 sector helps a
society
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 of poverty, where
people
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 are able to good livelihood.
Day
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 by
day
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 crime rate has decreased because of new job opportunities for
society
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people
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.
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,
day
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 by
day
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 most Middle Eastern countries are inspiring other countries to improve
tourism
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sectors
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.
Tourism
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sectors
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 boost a country's GDP which helps to develop a good
society
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 and new social opportunities.
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