Sugar consumption is too harmful. Some say it is government’s responsibility to limit sugar intake, while others say it’s individual who are responsible. Discuss both views and give you opinion?

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is an important part of our daily lives.
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, some people think that consumption of too much
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can cause severe damage to the body and they want the government to do something about it,
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others think that it totally depends on an individual; like how much they want to eat it in a day. I personally believe that both parties need to find a middle ground about
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growing issue.
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with, The best thing the government can do is that can introduce some laws for
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companies, where they can put only a limited amount of
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in their products.
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, a normal human being able to consume
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without even worrying about health risks. Another thing they can do is to ban artificial sweeteners because the ingredients companies use are not good for an individual who uses them on an everyday basis.
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, countries like Brazil, India, and many more countries banned sweeteners when they found out it was making their residents sick.
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, people
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need to stop eating
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items that contain high amounts of
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such
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as canned fruits, and frozen desserts example a few.
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, research done by BBC in 2017 showed that folks who stopped eating high-
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got healthier in a few months by losing a lot of weight which was caused by sweet products. Moving
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, some individuals like
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that contains high amounts of
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and they like to lot of ice cream or snacks
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as chocolate bars. In cases like
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laws are useless as people can eat whatever they want so it depends on them if they want to lessen the intake of
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type of
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or not.
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, I think laws can only help us when comes to the manufacturing part of it
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, it still very much depends on folks if they want to buy it or not.
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