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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinions.

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It is thought by some that
people
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 with certain professions,
such
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 as medicine and engineering, should
work
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 in the
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 where they have obtained their qualifications,
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 others argue that these
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 can
work
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 wherever they want. Both sides have certain benefits
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 drawbacks which are important to consider for
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 who
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 in these areas. In my opinion, both choices are equally good, and it all depends on the individuals what they think is best for their lives and future. Being a doctor or an engineer in a
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 that one graduated from provides a lot of benefits, as he or she knows what to expect from the working societies when the academic training is complete. During the learning process, these
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 get a lot of chances to do internships in their own
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, so they learn what
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 might require from them when they graduate.
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, it is easier to
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 in a
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 where you can already speak the language well.
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, one has a better chance of growing faster in a professional aspect, because he does not need to spend extra time learning new working systems, getting to know new groups of
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, or trying to communicate in another language.
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, working in only one environment might have some drawbacks, as it might get boring as time goes by, or some
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 might find it not challenging, and paying too little money when compared to working in other countries.
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,
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 who think professionals should have the freedom to
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 in any
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 they want might argue that getting a career abroad can provide them with much better income and quality of life.
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 is especially true among academic areas that require strenuous training.
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, these
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 can have better chances at furthering their education and skills when they are abroad since technologies and advancements are usually created in the more developed nations.
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, these professionals have to struggle during the process of trying to
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 abroad, including getting their visas which take a long time, learning and sitting in extra language exams,
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 being far away from home. In conclusion, I think it is convenient for professionals to
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 in the
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 that they have qualifications from.
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, it can be more financially fulfilling and professionally challenging for these
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 to
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 abroad. It all depends on what
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 desire for their lives and their future prospects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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