The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles* between 2006 and 2009.

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nunber

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number

of hybrid vehicles that can

sold

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around the world from 2006 to 2009.

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, it can be seen that every category experienced

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same

trand

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trend

until 2009,

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number of

sale

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Japan

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significantly

rise

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and reached the first ranking. 2006 to 2008, the majority of sales

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to the US, which there was a remarkable gap between the remaining countries at around 3 times

from

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sales in

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Fallowed

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by other countries and

Japan

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, 2006 saw

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same

value

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between these categories at 50,000;

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steadily

grow

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in the

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years,

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was

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then

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. Meanwhile, the figure from

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significantly in 2007;

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value

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decrease

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slightly until the end of the period.

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, 2009 had a dramatic increase in the number of

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Japan

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;

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value

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reached

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peak at approximately 330,000,

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the US

value

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droped

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dropped

to second rank and the other

contries

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countries

remantime

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maintained

least

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the least

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sales.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Single idea per paragraph

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