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Newspapers and books are out-dated. Why do some people believe this? What is your opinion about the future of books and newspapers? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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In
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 modern world
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technology is progressing,
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and there
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 are some people who believe
books
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 and
newspapers
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 are obsolete.
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 I disagree, in
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 essay I am going to write about
this
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 topic. First of all, most
newspapers
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 usually publish on the same day or at least the same week and they have a date on them and after a certain
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 they will expire and vanish from the market. So in
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 case,
newspapers
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 are reliable and it is our responsibility not to choose an expired newspaper.
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,
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 the world is changing fast, it is not that fast to expire
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data
 in
books
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 or magazines.
On the other hand
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, some believe that television can be a good alternative to
newspapers
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 or
books
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 but they are unaware that news on television channels cover the news and information very briefly and they can not be valid and comprehensive. So people always need to fill out their information by some
books
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 after watching television or reading some articles on the internet,
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 most of the information that we get on the internet is not valid and they have not been written by an expert or a proficient in that field. So people always need to research to make sure the essay that they have read is valid. And some fields of
books
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 do not have an expiration date
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 as philosophical
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 and psychological ones.
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, our modern world is changing rapidly but not that fast that our
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 would
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.
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 the internet covers a variety of info, they are not reliable. Because we can not make sure that they have been written by an expert and they
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are usually
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 done very briefly. In my opinion,
books
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 will not
outdated
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be outdated
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 anyway.
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