The company you work for is planning to provide special staff training Your duty is to find out if the local conference center has suitable facilities in order to hold the training. Write a letter to the manager of the conference center.

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Dear Sir/Madam, Good day to you. I am from The General Company located at No.39 Ivory Technology Park. We will be conducting a

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training for our

staffs

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staff

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and currently looking for a suitable venue. The purpose of

this

letter is to enquire about the

conference

centre

offered by your company. The training is for 25 of our managers and it will be conducted by a professional training company. We are looking for a

conference

centre

that is

able to fit in all the participants and facilitators of about 30 pax. In terms of schedule, it has been fixed to hold the training on 11th November (Friday) from 10am until 5pm. The training will be conducted via classroom teaching mode.

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, I would like to enquire if your

conference

centre

does provide

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and speaker?

Apart from

this

, one of the information required is what are the facilities available at the

conference

centre

? Parking space is a concern for us and

also

, what types of meals are included in the package? Hope to hear from you soon on the

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enquired. Regards, John Smith

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