Some claim that studying abroad has greater benefit than studying in one’s home country? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent days, there have been numerous people studying overseas. Whether folks have a chance to choose to
study
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in one's
hometown
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is a controversial issue. In my opinion, it wholeheartedly supports the first statement, it is believed that
study
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abroad helps to find a relevant job more easily than in
hometown
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.
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with, studying in foreign
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assists in acquiring valuable knowledge.
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,
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from 3-level
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are more tend to come to foreign
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for better education, because their hometowns can not provide them with better education. By way of illustration,
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CNN News roughly 65 percent of
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from India tend to
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overseas,
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as UK, USA, Australia, and so on.
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, a lot of
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choose to
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abroad,
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balance work and
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.
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,
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are capable of earning some money for their own daily expenses and
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for aiding family members. One clear example is from Uzbekistan
students
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' endeavour to persevere in studies abroad and when the task is accomplished they combine work and
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; and
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solely focus on these two tasks.
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, it leads to becoming more mature, proficient, and financially stable.
Conversely
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, the young generation needs to
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in their own
hometown
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for improvement and prevention of conventional things.
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, some 3-level
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are opening doors for foreign universities, which helps conserve local
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from studying abroad.
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, even if children choose to
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, they have to come back and help to develop their home town, but choose to stay and work in foreign companies or organizations; which leads to a scarcity of potential specialists in workplaces.
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, there is an extreme scarcity of specialists in Information Technology in Uzbekistan,
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as Data Scientists, Backend developers, Cyber security architects, and so on.
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, studying overseas leads to complete forgetting of national things, and dwellers become more selfish rather than staying with their own family members. That's why, parents doesn't desire to send their offsprings abroad.
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, after weighing up both sides of the argument it is indispensable to say that the young generation needs to
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abroad, to become mature, proficient, and financially stable.
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, they need to remember, and honour their
hometown
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, and come back to
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evolvement.
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